Careful With Your Eagerness – Haiku #1


” let thy hunger not behest,

for what thou art eager for,

else mere desire shall grow into irrational lust, your reflection’ll be a harbinger “

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in simple terms:

let your hunger not dictate,

about what you are eager for,

else, desire shall become lust, look at your own reflection to keep check.

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This post is an entry in Haiku Challenge for April 2012 at Haiku Heights. The prompt being “eager”.

My first haiku. I never ventured into this form of poetry before and writing something in as short as 3 lines does seem a challenge and after you have done it will turn into a pleasure.

my recommends for the prompt “eager” :

1)  Cynosure : http://musedcynosure.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager-haiku.html

2 ) RAZZAMADAZZLE : http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2012/03/31/raindrop/

All other entries for this prompt can be found here :

http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/2012/04/april-heights-day-1-113-eager.html

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12 thoughts on “Careful With Your Eagerness – Haiku #1

  1. Hey Jayanth, this is very deep, but not a haiku. I saw your latest one and that’s quite right with the syllables, but this is way off. 😦

    Don’t get confused with syllables. It’s quite easy to pick up I feel. take for e.g. the title itself 🙂

    Care-ful with your ea-ger-ness *7 syllables 😀 Just split it as you pronounce it. Sim-ple! 🙂

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