In Dreamy Haze – Haiku #4



in a dreamy haze,

wanders my soul, deserted,

in silence i love.


A note : I am new to writing Haiku and I know I need to improve a lot to write a 3-line haiku pertaining to the rules. I would welcome all help and also re-writes of my Haiku so that i can learn (about the syllables).

Sarab, a fellow blogger, a friend, has been very kind to help me out. I thank him, a special mention he deserves indeed. Thank you.

His blog : Mused Cynosure

This post is an entry in Haiku Challenge for April 2012 at Haiku Heights. The prompt being “deserted”.



  1. Like the thoughts here! In order to fit the form, haiku have syllable counts of either 3-5-3 or 5-7-5. Yours is 4-7-5, so if you add one syllable to the first line it will be a normal haiku 🙂

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