Brothers In Arms – Haiku #6

the brothers of blood 

into brothers in arms, peace –

– deserted for piece.


meaning : (about the Indo-Pak divide)

we fought for independence together like brothers of blood, but turned against one another,

and all it took was one night before the independence,

peace forever left us there after, we still are in turmoil, just because a piece of land and pride became important.

sad 😦



This post is an entry in Haiku Challenge for April 2012 at Haiku Heights. The prompt being “deserted”.

6 thoughts on “Brothers In Arms – Haiku #6

  1. Very good theme…have a fresh look on second line….don’t mind…my suggestion.. think it over.. and buddy, thanks for visiting me so quick…we will move together for whole month.. lets see..

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