Hope Battles Fate – Haiku #15


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” O’ love, words meager,

our eyes meet no longer, pain’s

leash. hope battles fate “

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Suggestions and corrections are most welcome, I’m still learning Haiku. :)

This post is an entry in Haiku Challenge for April 2012 at Haiku Heights. The prompt being “hope”.

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9 Comments

    1. thank you, pranita.

      i like the archaic expressions used in old english. so when ever possible, i write lines in that way. 😀 i feel guilty, that i may actually be not following the actual grammar of it. 😀

  1. I enjoyed your haiku. It is a question we ask in times of upheaval in our life. Can hope battle fate and win? Nicely done..

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