She Sells Shells – Haiku #24


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dreams big and hopes high,

she sells sea shells on seashore,

buy one, help her smile

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a haiku inspired by the famous tongue twister “she sells sea shells on the sea shore”

can’t get it right once, not once πŸ˜€ :O

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Suggestions and corrections are most welcome, I’m still learning Haiku.Β :)

This post is an entry inΒ Haiku Challenge for April 2012Β atΒ Haiku Heights. The prompt being β€˜seashore’.

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17 Comments

  1. haha…nice one Jayanth…u reminded me of one the very first toungue twisters that I learnt… πŸ˜‰
    nice Haiku…

    BTW can i try… for the 2nd line… “shells she sells on the seashore”… πŸ˜›

  2. Ah, beautiful what a lovely thought. and appeal….let me paint a picture…

    Dreams big and hopes high,
    she sells sea shells on seashore;
    ah, he picks her smile..

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