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dreams big and hopes high,
she sells sea shells on seashore,
buy one, help her smile
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a haiku inspired by the famous tongue twister “she sells sea shells on the sea shore”
can’t get it right once, not once 😀 :O
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Suggestions and corrections are most welcome, I’m still learning Haiku. 
This post is an entry in Haiku Challenge for April 2012 at Haiku Heights. The prompt being ‘seashore’.
Black and White Heart 
haha…nice one Jayanth…u reminded me of one the very first toungue twisters that I learnt… 😉
nice Haiku…
BTW can i try… for the 2nd line… “shells she sells on the seashore”… 😛
Haha… lovely adaption… I can get it right to an extent… but not very fast!
ha ha.. tongue twisters are really tough.
Well done take on this tongue twister. Perfect haiku. Fun
thank you, Ellecee
Love how you have commandeered familiar words and given them a new sensitivity!
thank you.. 🙂
Very nice and cute, and clever! Lovely 🙂
Thank You, Mariya 🙂
Ah, fun!
This was the first thing that came into my head when I saw the prompt, although I wrote something different.
Yes… it was fun.. 🙂
Cute one.
This is so cute!
thank you.. :).
Ah, beautiful what a lovely thought. and appeal….let me paint a picture…
Dreams big and hopes high,
she sells sea shells on seashore;
ah, he picks her smile..
aah and how beautiful her smile is. 🙂
that’s beautiful, sir. 🙂
and Thank You Rameshji.. 🙂
The moment I saw that prompt….I got that tongue twister in mind…but you used them in your haiku very creatively….Beautifully penned